Another revision

 Today I am going to write another revised edition. This week I read three articles about feeback. I learned a lot. The first thing I learned is that feedback is about discussions and questions about your point of view. I think this is the right way to define what is feedback and The second thing I learned is that you need someone to leave you feedback, such as a teacher or student or someone who is very professional on the topic. The third thing I tend to rewrite when i receive feedback, because it will improve your writing and think about the last thing, when rewrite your feedback always read your feedback .

The benefit of feedback is that it can point out specific aspects of your work that have been praised or not handled properly, because if you don’t want to change it, you will continue to repeat mistakes. Overall I think that to improve myself, the first thing is to read the feedback you received, and the second thing is to write down whatever you think is useful, confuse and agree, and  when I rewrite always read the feedback. I used these methods for the second rewrite. Although I did not receive any feedback on my blog this week, I still use this feedback to rewrite

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