Revising writing

Based on the feedback I received, I understand my weaknesses and strengths, so I listed a few points and made changes when rewriting the reading test. The first one I listed in a good way is that I have a good structure so I will keep it in my blog. The second one is that I seem to have found enough information in the reading task to debate and share my opinion. For example, I will always take notes and key points in the video test and reading test, so I will keep them in my review test and my blog. The third is because of my enthusiasm for the creative media industry. I have already expressed subjective opinions, which flow in my text, so I think I used them again when rewriting the text. I also did more research in my rewritten text, because this will have more understanding and another point of view in my blog. The last one is that I always use my own words to describe a complex media world so that all levels of technology users can access it. So I did keep it in my rewrite task.

Based on the feedback I received, I also understand my weaknesses, so I listed a few points and modified them when I rewrite the reading task. The first one is that I did not refer to the reading texts and articles that I can refer to. . Because some reference links may be useful. So I knew and changed in my rewrite blog. The second is that I did not include more examples in my blog, so this time I included more than one example in my blog. The third one is that I know that although I did a lot of research and took notes while reading, I did not provide a different point of view, so I knew this and I made changes in my review blog.


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